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Misnomers kept coming in. Thermal precursors added to the chaos. Spectral disturbances caused more psychological harm than actual damage.
Shut schools, deserted roads, silent trees, gave an eerie feel. Country heads urged the citizens to maintain calm. People tried to use their associative intelligence to comprehend the warnings. They longed for some God-Father assurance to suggest everything was fine. Nothing seemed coming around, but hopes remained…..
And so, did the mystery……
82 year old, Simon tucked himself inside the cave. With eyes tight shut, he silently vented his anger. He cursed the masses for their ignorance. He shunned the leaders for their slack. He growled at the wise for their silence. For none realized, that the seeds of global warming had begun to sprout!!!
20 comments:
Simple , short and yet informative and a social message.
I like it :)
All the best
simple but powerful.. Nicely done Viyoma..
--Someone is Special--
this was really nice!! short, simple yet conveys a lot. All the very best!
nice!
Expressed at its best..The words used are lovely..
Gives a beautiful message with unfurl of "The mystery"
All the best for BAT-17 :)
Alcina - The Mystery
Good one...
the message hit hard...poignant piece of writing...well done :)
Short but so much packed with mystery, moral and warnings where human race must get vigilant and be alarmed!
ATB Viyoma...:-) Good morning!
Good Morning Viyoma,
I got to say this. From my point of view this power packed post brings in brevity, a social message and some good semantics together.
It is a total winner.
Good Job Vi :):)
very powerful thought and eye opening post.
well conveyed...
Powerful thought provoking post.
That was one wise old cave man!!
(literally man in cave - LOL)
All the Best for BAT 17.
What a powerful way of creating the atmosphere of mystery with apt words. Right from the beginning , a suspense atmosphere is imminent. One needs a lot of talent, conception and hold of the language to covey such a message in brief description. A very different take. All the best.
Very nice, I say.
PS: You don't write long ones... and that's why I like visiting your blog.
thats a brilliant take!!
Global Warming itself is a Mystery!Thanks for highlighting it.
a mystery thats swallowing Planet Earth like never before..!!!
nice work dear :)
All the best for BAT dear..!!!
Yamini Meduri - The Mystery
Yours
Yamini Meduri
May be a bit small but Conveyed the right message..
Who said size matters when you can weave words to leave a dent the size of a crater? Well done! ATB for BAT17! :)
Thank you so much dear for your continuous encouragement and appreciation. You deserve much more than this.
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