Monday, July 14, 2014

On the Wrong Side

She gasped , she choked. 
Her mouth wide open in bewilderment , hands numb by fear. 
Was she standing on the wrong side of the sea, she wondered. 
But there was no other side to stand on. 
The sky looked fine. The moon was shining bright. 
  Rising on the wrong side, were only the Tides.

                                                 This post is a part of Ultimate Blogging Challenge - July 2014 - Day 14                             
                                                                            My Theme for this week - Short Fiction                                                             
                                                 55 Fiction  is  a  Short work of fiction comprising of exactly 55 words                                

2 comments:

Kathy Widenhouse said...

Everything else seems in order ... except the Tides. Can't wait to see what symbolism lies there.

Amy Bovaird said...

Interesting. Is this a starter? I'm not aware of the Blog Challenge that you are participating in but that sounds like a great prompt! Good for you for participating everyday!