Saturday, May 7, 2011

A Misty Window

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 20; the twentieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

The maid with a cloth went to mop the misty glass; I stopped and lead her to nearby table. Dusting the table was more important, I said, I have to chop my vegetables there.

The mist had just begun to form, I realized.

I reached for the remote of the television set, to get updates on the latest news. My Sis casually passed by me, heading to the window, for a misty see. Quickly I placed the remote back in her hand, reminded her it was KBC Time. Ensured she headed for a comfortable seating,

I quietly glanced at my window wet!



Mom returned home, after a tiring day. Stuffy is the room, she said, and asked for some fresh air. But the A/c of the next room is already On, I quipped. Recalling, she helped herself straight there.

Some silent dews slid by the window pane….

Naughty Fluffy has discipline to abide. But with the screens drawn open, the panes are bare. Off from my hand it jumps, and lands on its paws, sliding them across the misty panes. Disgusted I feel, prepared to face the distorted dews…

They jostled, but only to re-settle on the slippery surface!


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Image - Window Rain Drops by Eric Alder

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12 comments:

Deepika said...

A nice descriptive post. The image is very apt and words mistiful... All the best for BAT.

The Fool said...

Interesting how different people react in the same situation.

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

Superb!!! it matched perfectly with the pic

Someone is Special said...

Wonderful words Vyo... I love the idea behind your words..

Good luck for BAT....and ~ the pic became our.. the home became our... ~

Someone is Special

Leo said...

very nicely done! a fresh perspective, I liked it a lot! :)

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Enchanta said...

The specialty about this post is that it doesn't talk about any special event.

All the best!

Fatima said...

Nicely crafted...and yes this thing did cross my mind, a single thing can be interpreted in so many number of ways...guess that's the beauty of art and writing!

Keep Writing, nice blog and yes..All the Best to you too :)

Take Care.

vineet said...

a very ordinary thng describd in such a illustrios extraordinary way

Hafsah said...

Simple yet beautiful :)

JamieDedes said...

It has as elemental a feel as rain. Beautifully imagined. Well done for Blog-a-Ton.

Pritish said...

Beautifully written. Pretty creative. Keep Blogging :-)

sush said...

One interesting write up. Am gonna read other posts soon........