Sunday, April 3, 2011

Journey

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 19; the nineteenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

Jostling around these busy streets,
Once there lay a familiar path
Unending... seems the lane today
Recalling the residents, that once stayed.
Now,fractured concrete is left to stare
Every prayer builds hope in the air
Yearning to forgive,how the Quake has fared!

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12 comments:

Someone is Special said...

You have said it all in an Acrostic.. Amazing... Hope the fear of quake goes away soon and let SmileS flourish there.. mine is a dream a journey of...

Someone is Special

The Fool said...

Lovely tribute to the quake victims. I am also learning to write acrostics these days.

Enchanta said...

Short, precise and impacting!

Way to go!

All the best

D2 said...

Made good use of an acrostic. Like Enchanta said, short yet appropriate.
Lovely.

All the best for the BAT.

Vinay said...

brilliant Viyoma! a tribute in seven lines that said it all. well written.

you've missed the bottom blockquote btw :) do add it.

Here's My Blog-a-Ton Journey

RG said...

C ompact
R esonating
I nsightful
S hort
P oem

Keep it up, Viyo.

Cherry Blossom said...

You are too good at precise and touching presentations. This poem is so artistically and intellectually presented. Well done. A very different take on the topic. Keep it up.

Sureindran said...

Short and yet the most meaningful. Nice post and all the best!

Sureindran
www.sureindran.com

Pratibha The Talent said...

very thought provoking and a nice message for the earthquake victims.

Amity said...

A very short but thought provoking poem Viyoma...I like it...a long journey is at hand after the catastrophe!

ATB :)

Yamini Meduri said...

wonderful tribute thro an Acro...!!!


All the best for BAT..!!!

Heres mine..!!

Yamini Meduri - Journey

VIKRAM KARVE said...

Lovely