Thursday, June 10, 2010

55 Fiction


Vengeance and anger had exhausted him. They were counting his words as he spoke. Content was lost, only numbers remained.

“5 more words and he stops”; the regulator’s words echoed the room.

Baffled and numb he didn’t know what to say. “Who governs these curtailments?” he managed to ask.

Fiction 55, came the reply.

7 comments:

Vinayak said...

very nice post
keep blogging

Anjali said...

Hmm..your 1st attempt, looks like!
Not bad..can try better next time.

rainboy said...

nice :)
well written...
keep writing more 55 fiction.

Take care

http://smellofearthafterrain.blogspot.com/

Shantanu said...

keep writing

Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) said...

acc1234quite a good attempt since its your first time... keep writting...

cheers!
Tavish

wordsmith said...

Brilliant! I've been wondering if there were other themes possible; now I know ...

vinay said...

Awesome, I too had tried my hand at fiction in 50 words.
4 segments of 50 words each to make one complete story.

http://insanemoviegeek.blogspot.com/2011/09/last-job.html

do check