She gasped , she choked.
Her mouth
wide open in bewilderment , hands numb by fear.
Was she standing on
the wrong side of the sea, she wondered.
But there was no other side to stand on.
The sky
looked fine. The moon was shining bright.
Rising on the wrong side, were only the Tides.
This post is a part of Ultimate Blogging Challenge - July 2014 - Day 14
My Theme for this week - Short Fiction
55 Fiction is a Short work of fiction comprising of exactly 55 words
2 comments:
Everything else seems in order ... except the Tides. Can't wait to see what symbolism lies there.
Interesting. Is this a starter? I'm not aware of the Blog Challenge that you are participating in but that sounds like a great prompt! Good for you for participating everyday!
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