Vengeance and anger had exhausted him. They were counting his words as he spoke. Content was lost, only numbers remained.
“5 more words and he stops”; the regulator’s words echoed the room.
Baffled and numb he didn’t know what to say. “Who governs these curtailments?” he managed to ask.
Fiction 55, came the reply.
7 comments:
very nice post
keep blogging
Hmm..your 1st attempt, looks like!
Not bad..can try better next time.
nice :)
well written...
keep writing more 55 fiction.
Take care
http://smellofearthafterrain.blogspot.com/
keep writing
acc1234quite a good attempt since its your first time... keep writting...
cheers!
Tavish
Brilliant! I've been wondering if there were other themes possible; now I know ...
Awesome, I too had tried my hand at fiction in 50 words.
4 segments of 50 words each to make one complete story.
http://insanemoviegeek.blogspot.com/2011/09/last-job.html
do check
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