“Don’t worry I will be home in 10 mins”; says a concerned mother comforting her son. Their conversation is in a vernacular language, which gives out that she is speaking to her son and not a daughter. Another call, at a 3 people away distance, the lady is instructing somebody to keep “hot tea” ready for her, before she reaches home. I could not guess the relationship here, but the idea of hot tea in this suddenly chilled weather, was soothing to hear.
A young boy, approximately 7-8 years old, was standing in front of me, fully drenched, his face wet with trickling rain water. He never bothered to dry himself. In any case, standing at the doorway with rains pouring in, his efforts to dry would have hardly helped. I was tempted to click a picture of him. It would have made a perfect image for this post. But my own hands are too wet, to reach out to my cell. More so I had to be sensitive to the fact, that even a slightest change in my position, could cause inconvenience to my dear fellow commuters.
It’s ironical. However drenched one may be, they don’t want their neighbours wet palm, elbows, or feet near them. Each one maintains as much safe distance as possible, even in a densely populated ladies compartment. It’s almost like a self imposed Stand still order.
When people’s options to swing-sway and move are curtailed, they land up looking up and down. They look up to the fan, with an expression “You are hardly of any use”. They look down, adjust and re-adjust their legs as much as possible to place them in the tidiest available slot. Their Capri length folded trousers may be dripping rain water, but that does not discourage them from expecting the neatest option available.
On getting down at the stations, even the otherwise trailing people, brisk walk their way out. Smart commuters. They know, three wheelers are more in demand than supply on a rainy day. They step out from the crowded local and get into the coyly dressed, curtain drawn rickshaws…..
haha rainy day tales ar always interesting. loed reading this vyo.
ReplyDeletei love train journeys.. :)
ReplyDeleteLove rain.. and travelling in trains while raining, only if it is not crowded.. :)
ReplyDeleteGood post.
lovely refreshing post!
ReplyDeleteGreat. Could feel the rains.
ReplyDeletehonestly for someone who hasn't experience rain in a few days this feels like a heavy downpour of all the action, I'm glad to read about a not so eventful part of life from someone else as these can be ever so memorable, even worth writing a post about! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad to have stopped by.
Love the rain,love the train journeys but not together:)
ReplyDeleteNice post!
Wow! Good writing.
ReplyDeleteEspecially the looking up and down part.
I like it
Well Written Post,Vyoma.You can write Short Stories.All the best!
ReplyDeleteGood one. Felt like I was traveling with u.
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