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Thursday, June 10, 2010

55 Fiction


Vengeance and anger had exhausted him. They were counting his words as he spoke. Content was lost, only numbers remained.

“5 more words and he stops”; the regulator’s words echoed the room.

Baffled and numb he didn’t know what to say. “Who governs these curtailments?” he managed to ask.

Fiction 55, came the reply.

7 comments:

  1. VinayakJune 10, 2010

    very nice post
    keep blogging

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  2. UnknownJune 10, 2010

    Hmm..your 1st attempt, looks like!
    Not bad..can try better next time.

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  3. rainboyJune 12, 2010

    nice :)
    well written...
    keep writing more 55 fiction.

    Take care

    http://smellofearthafterrain.blogspot.com/

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  4. mysterytrystJune 13, 2010

    keep writing

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  5. Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com)June 15, 2010

    acc1234quite a good attempt since its your first time... keep writting...

    cheers!
    Tavish

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  6. wordsmithJuly 31, 2010

    Brilliant! I've been wondering if there were other themes possible; now I know ...

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  7. vinayOctober 01, 2011

    Awesome, I too had tried my hand at fiction in 50 words.
    4 segments of 50 words each to make one complete story.

    http://insanemoviegeek.blogspot.com/2011/09/last-job.html

    do check

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