Jostling around these busy streets,
Once there lay a familiar path
Unending... seems the lane today
Recalling the residents, that once stayed.
Now,fractured concrete is left to stare
Every prayer builds hope in the air
Yearning to forgive,how the Quake has fared!
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You have said it all in an Acrostic.. Amazing... Hope the fear of quake goes away soon and let SmileS flourish there.. mine is a dream a journey of...
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Lovely tribute to the quake victims. I am also learning to write acrostics these days.
ReplyDeleteShort, precise and impacting!
ReplyDeleteWay to go!
All the best
Made good use of an acrostic. Like Enchanta said, short yet appropriate.
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All the best for the BAT.
brilliant Viyoma! a tribute in seven lines that said it all. well written.
ReplyDeleteyou've missed the bottom blockquote btw :) do add it.
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Keep it up, Viyo.
You are too good at precise and touching presentations. This poem is so artistically and intellectually presented. Well done. A very different take on the topic. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteShort and yet the most meaningful. Nice post and all the best!
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very thought provoking and a nice message for the earthquake victims.
ReplyDeleteA very short but thought provoking poem Viyoma...I like it...a long journey is at hand after the catastrophe!
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wonderful tribute thro an Acro...!!!
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT..!!!
Heres mine..!!
Yamini Meduri - Journey
Lovely
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