Saturday, July 28, 2007

One gloomy Saturday


One dark gloomy Saturday.
Gloomy..that explains the weather outside.
Raining Heavily…Its afternoon time..sun-rays seen no-where.

Here,I m all by myself…in a relaxed mood. Weather is chill…the ceiling fan of my room rotating in full swing. I love to make the atmosphere around me more chilling…even though it’s already cold outside.

Cozily I lay on my bed…some random thoughts, freaky ideas, abstract conversations all pouring in. This inspires me to write. But write what? Haven’t thought about it… definitely something using the best of my vocabulary…something tender, something pensive, something articulate…And no! it shouldn’t be funny…neither thought provoking….just an experience..Just a feeling.

Rains continue to pour outside. I m in my room, with lights dim. Wise people generally advice not to strain our eyes in dim lights. But I m here with my writing pad, penning some stray thoughts, just hoping, not to be disturbed while cherishing these beautiful moments.

The experience is Enchanting…
Chillness Endearing…
A wonderful-wonderful feeling…that makes me say…
“Luxury Defined”

3 comments:

  1. i love listening to thoughts..

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  2. wen U feel things inside
    its like at th dam
    at times
    wen th water level is at th peak
    its dyin to flow out


    but
    then only way is to open th gates
    but untill U knw that
    U cant do anythin
    tho U can feel everythin
    inside
    describin is tough
    verbalisin is tough
    so people choose to draw
    paint
    sing
    dance
    cuz
    wen U describe
    U choose a common media
    but
    while
    singing paintin
    dancin
    its ur own
    its personal
    so they r bettr n easier
    to express feelings

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  3. Cool..Neat stuff this.
    I really liked the bit after "But write what?"
    The prev bit and the wise people bit were a little jarring in the context ..rotating in full swing is outta sync with the rest ofthe prose

    But overall really good use of imagery :)

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